My first novel.
Like many first novels, it's a tad too ambitious. For my maiden foray
into the world of authorship, I chose to write nothing less than a
science-fiction version of Euripides' The Bacchae. Might as
well go for broke.
The plotline and theme of Euripides' tragedy had long seemed to me as
if they were ready-made for SF, and I just wanted to give it a try. My
version is too crowded with incident, a little too experimental in style.
It's a temptation for first novelists that I rapidly succumbed to: a
chance to pack as much into your book as you possibly can.
Even though I'd go
about it differently if I were writing the book today,
An Exercise for Madmen is my first-born and I still have a soft
spot for it. There are parts of the novel that work very well, and I did
learn things about writing from the bumpier sections. As a piece of
high-striving fiction from a rank beginner...it isn't terrible.
The story concerns a medical research facility that has been located on
an isolated planet as a deterrant against contamination should some lethal
virus escape. It's a highly disciplined, tightly-organized, work-oriented
community in which everyone has a place and functions well and contentedly
in that place.
Then a stranger arrives on the planet, an alien from an uncharted area of
space. The stranger insinuates himself into the community, and almost
immediately his influence is felt. Discipline becomes lax, work goes
unfinished or is sloppily done, the whole attitude of the community begins
to change...until eventually it all erupts into one wild night of
Dionysian revelry that leaves the place a shambles.
The next day the stranger is gone and the survivors are left to pick up
the pieces. They go about doing so in a particularly chilling way.
I've never seriously attempted to write predictive science fiction, so I
got a big kick out of seeing one piece of imaginary research in my book
eventually come true. I had a group of scientists working on developing
a laboratory version of a substance called luciferin that's found in
mushrooms; it's what gives the fungus its "glow". The modified substance
was to be used to trace cancer cells
in the human body. Just such a substance is now available to hospitals
and physicians; it's called Luciferase.
Review from Publisher's Weekly:
"In this first novel, Paul, who has previously published only short
stories, makes an impressive SF debut. Her morality tale is delightful
and imaginative....Zalmox changes the disciplined, hard-working Pythians
into sexual revelers...until morning-after sobriety brings with it alarming
consequences."